This originally appeared at https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC9302774/
Authors :
Barrett Wallace Montgomery, Conceptualization, Formal analysis, Investigation, Methodology, Visualization, Writing – original draft, Writing – review & editing, 1 ,*Meaghan H. Roberts, Formal analysis, Methodology, Validation, Writing – review & editing, 2 Claire E. Margerison, Methodology, Project administration, Supervision, Writing – review & editing, 1 and James C. Anthony, Conceptualization, Supervision, Writing – review & editing 1
Giuseppe Carrà, Editor
Abstract
Liberalized state-level recreational cannabis policies in the United States (US) fostered important policy evaluations with a focus on epidemiological parameters such as proportions [e.g., active cannabis use prevalence; cannabis use disorder (CUD) prevalence]. This cannabis policy evaluation project adds novel evidence on a neglected parameter–namely, estimated occurrence of newly incident cannabis use for underage (<21 years) versus older adults. The project’s study populations were specified to yield nationally representative estimates for all 51 major US jurisdictions, with probability sample totals of 819,543 non-institutionalized US civilian residents between 2008 and 2019. Standardized items to measure cannabis onsets are from audio computer-assisted self-interviews. Policy effect estimates are from event study difference-in-difference (DiD) models that allow for causal inference when policy implementation is staggered. The evidence indicates no policy-associated changes in the occurrence of newly incident cannabis onsets for underage persons, but an increased occurrence of newly onset cannabis use among older adults (i.e., >21 years). We offer a tentative conclusion of public health importance: Legalized cannabis retail sales might be followed by the increased occurrence of cannabis onsets for older adults, but not for underage persons who cannot buy cannabis products in a retail outlet. Cannabis policy research does not yet qualify as a mature science. We argue that modeling newly incident cannabis use might be more informative than the modeling of prevalences when evaluating policy effects and provide evidence of the advantages of the event study model over regression methods that seek to adjust for confounding factors.
Introduction
In drug dependence epidemiology, the estimated prevalences of active drug use are population health statistics that hide important patterns of (a) incidence (occurrence of first onsets) and (b) duration (e.g., duration and frequency of use after it starts). Lapouse [1], building upon prior work [2], argued that incidence estimates tell us about causes. In contrast, prevalence estimates tell us about caseloads and health services burdens. In a more recent review of the substance use epidemiology literature, Wu and colleagues echo these sentiments and note an abundance of research on prevalence, but a lack of literature on incidence [3].
Cheng and colleagues exploited this incidence-prevalence differentiation to show that a large sub-population of young adults in the United States (US) deliberately delayed their first drink until after the legal minimum drinking age [4, 5]. Prevalence hid this pattern. Members of our research group hypothesized that age-specific cannabis use incidence would show a similar pattern developing in jurisdictions that legalized cannabis: Once the legal minimum age for recreational cannabis use was set at 21 in some states, many young adults will wait until cannabis use is legal for them to try it [6].
These initial observations motivated this research to estimate whether legalizing recreational cannabis might affect the occurrence of newly incident cannabis use (i.e., incidence). Cannabis use incidence in the US has traditionally peaked between ages 15 and 17 with steady declines as each cohort gets older [6]. Since all states that legalized recreational cannabis set 21 as the legal minimum age to purchase recreational cannabis, we analyze incidence before and after the age 21 milestone is reached. We sought to understand how legalizing recreational cannabis may be affecting incidence for these two age strata and how the estimates can inform the US population experiences after cannabis policy liberalization.
We can see no prior research on cannabis use incidence post recreational cannabis legalization (RCL). The published literature to this point has evaluated prevalence of recent use, prevalence of cannabis use disorder (CUD), and frequency of use. Concerning associations between cannabis liberalization and cannabis use prevalence among youth, most published evidence indicates that prevalence did not change after legalization, and perhaps may have dropped in some sub-[7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12]. Yet, a minority of studies provide firm evidence of appreciable cannabis use prevalence increases among adolescents [13, 14, 15, 16]. As for CUD prevalence, the published evidence indicates that the 12-17-year-old participants in the National Surveys on Drug Use and Health (NSDUH) in states with legalized recreational cannabis might have been more likely to be CUD cases, but causal attribution to cannabis policy change remains uncertain [17]. As for the frequency of cannabis use among adolescents, the published estimates show no changes post RCL [17, 18, 19, 20].
Among adults of legal age to purchase cannabis in these states, the evidence looks quite different. Apart from a few early findings [15, 21, 22], the published estimates consistently show that the prevalence of cannabis use among adults may increase after legalization [9, 10, 17]. Increased odds of CUD were found among NSDUH respondents 26 and older [17] and poly use of cannabis with other drugs, including alcohol, was also found to have increased in adults over the age of 26 [23]. Nevertheless, other studies find no evidence of change and deem the evidence to be inconclusive [10, 20]. One study described an increase in frequent use in the 26 and older age group, but in no other sub-groups [17]. Another study found no increase in frequent or daily use in any sub-group [10].
To add novelty to cannabis policy evaluation research, we turned to the event study framework, an extension of the classic differences-in-differences (DiD) model. The DiD model is popular when the research goal is to estimate causal policy effects in the context of policy interventions in which the exposure and control groups are likely to differ on many dimensions. Its popularity might be traced to its constraints on unobserved confounding variables with the framework of relatively loose assumptions that the contrasted observed trends are parallel [24]. The event study model extension defines periods before and after legalization as intervention leads and lags. These lead and lag indicators allow for dynamic modeling of estimated changes in cannabis use incidence before and after the intervention.
We sought to estimate the causal effect of US state cannabis policy liberalization on the occurrence of newly incident cannabis use with respect to the legal minimum age. We produced age-stratified estimates for underage population members who were prohibited from purchasing cannabis, and for adults who were allowed to purchase retail cannabis, in several time periods relative to the dates of legalization.
Methods
Study population and sample
For this study, the population was specified to include non-institutionalized US civilian residents, sampled and assessed for successive NSDUH survey waves, 2008 through 2019. These NSDUH cross‐sectional surveys were conducted with multistage area probability sampling to draw state-level representative samples and to over-sample 12-to-17‐year‐olds. The total sample size for surveys conducted in this period includes 819,543 respondents. The average weighted screening participation level for the sample was 82% with an average interview participation level of 71% [25]. As this research used publicly available and anonymized data, the research was determined as not human subjects research by the Michigan State University Institutional Review Board on 8/26/2021 (MSU Study ID: STUDY00006620).
Standardized audio computer-assisted self-interview modules assessed each newly incident user’s month and year of first cannabis use, from which incidence estimates were derived from the NSDUH Restricted Data Access portal (R-DAS). R-DAS estimates are analysis-weighted with Taylor series derived variances and 95% confidence intervals (CI). The R-DAS portal also allows for state-specific analysis of data but can only be downloaded in pairs of years and not individual years (e.g., 2018–2019 vs. 2018, 2019). Thus, we produce estimates from six year-pairs in these analyses, not from 12 individual years.
We categorized states into different analysis groups according to each state’s year of legalization through 2018. Because the 2018–2019 year-pair is the most recent available data in R-DAS at the time of analysis, states that legalized cannabis in 2019 or later were categorized into the control group in which retail cannabis remained illegal. Washington and Colorado were included in the 2012 group. Oregon, Alaska, and Washington D.C. were in the 2014 group. California, Maine, Massachusetts, and Nevada were included in the 2016 group. Vermont and Michigan were included in the 2018 group. All other states were categorized into the control group for this analysis.
Primary outcome
Our primary estimate is the occurrence of newly incident cannabis use, calculated as ψ = Xr/Nr, where Xr is the number of individuals starting to use cannabis within the 1–12 month interval before assessment (NSDUH variable RECMJ_B until 2013, RECMJ2 starting in 2014) and Nr is all persons who had not started using cannabis before that interval (NSDUH variable ELIGMJ_B until 2013, ELIGMJ2 starting in 2014). Prevalences are estimated as p1 = Xr/N, where N is the total projected population size, and the estimated proportion of the population at risk (p2 = Nr/N), with the corresponding standard errors. Proportions of newly incident cannabis use are estimated from p1 and p2 as:
ψ=p1p2=Xr/NNr/N
Study design and statistical analysis
Recent explorations and analyses by econometricians revealed that estimating an average treatment effect is a bit of an over-simplification, especially when policy adoption is staggered [26, 27, 28, 29]. With a policy intervention described as a ‘treatment’, the average treatment effect on the treated (ATT) is a weighted average of all the possible two-period estimators. This estimate can be problematic if it averages out important treatment effect heterogeneity that can take place over time. If treatment effects vary over time, then the ATT estimate is biased [26].
We found some evidence that drug policy intervention effects might change over time due to these lagged policy effects, thus we believe the event study model is better suited to this context [30, 31]. Our study design contrasts estimates of cannabis incidence in the RCL states relative to non-RCL states before and after the legalization of cannabis at the state level. The DiD event study modelling yields estimates in each period relative to the year prior to legalization while controlling for fixed differences across states and national trends over time.
Our models can be expressed as:
Yst=RCLs×∑y=−5y≠−14βyI(t−t∗s=y)+βt+βs+ϵst
As described earlier, our datasets are constructed at the state category (s) by year (t) level. In our primary analyses, Yst denotes the cannabis incidence estimate for each state grouping in each year-pair. In the equation, βs denotes state fixed effects and βt denotes the fixed effects of time in calendar years. As a result, general time trends in cannabis incidence for each group of states are accommodated.
The variable RCLs is set equal to one if the observation is from a state that legalized cannabis with measurements before after the date of legalization and is set equal to zero otherwise. Time-event dummy variables I(t−t∗s=y) indicate the legality of cannabis in each state group by the first year of the R-DAS year-pair relative to the year of legalization (t∗s) and are set equal to zero for all observations from states that did not legalize recreational cannabis during the study period. These variables are referred to in this analysis as ‘leads’ (indicators of time-event before legalization) and ‘lags’ (indicators of time-event after legalization). The omitted category is y = −1, the year-pair before legalization. Therefore, each βy estimate quantifies the difference in newly incident cannabis use occurrences in the RCL states relative to states with no policy change during year y compared to differences in the year-pair that immediately preceded legalization. When only one or two categories of states would be included at an interval because of the variation in legalization timing across states (≤6 years before legalization and ≥ 4 years after legalization), some lead and lag indicators are combined to balance the extremes and prevent modelling the outcome for only small subsets of the data. This is commonly referred to as balancing the leads and lags of the model [27].
If occurrences of newly incident cannabis use trend similarly in all groups before legalization, we would expect that the estimated coefficients for the lead indicators will be small and indifferent from the null value in a test of the parallel trends assumption built into our model. When estimated coefficients for the lag indicators are positive departures from the null, this provides supporting evidence to reject the null hypothesis (e.g., an increase in the occurrence of newly incident cannabis use in RCL states).
In addition to the event study estimates of change at each time interval, we also present a simple 2x2 DiD estimate of the ATT as a summary of the estimated effect on those aged 21 and older across all post-legalization years through 2019 and an average treatment effect with the same method for the 12-to-20-year-olds. This estimate is derived from the same equation with the event study dummy variables replaced with a single indicator for post-policy change states.
Dates of legalization vs. dates of implementation
We note that the mean number of days between the date of legalization and actual retail sales in the states in our sample (except for Washington D.C. where sales have never been legal) is approximately 500 days [32]. We set the T0 interval for this study to be a close approximation of this interval of elapsed time between policy enactment and actual implementation (i.e., start of retail sales).
Alternative specifications and robustness checks
To ensure the robustness of our analyses, we examined two alternate specifications. The first alternate specification uses the same method to estimate the effect of RCL on cannabis prevalence. The estimate for prevalence has been studied extensively in the literature and we compare our results to prior estimates as a check of face validity for our model. The second robustness check uses a time placebo as a check of robustness. In this model, a random year within the data was selected as the year that states legalized cannabis. The model is then run with the same specifications. If any of this model’s coefficients are large enough to reject the null hypothesis, the evidence suggests a potentially spurious relationship.
All beta coefficients from the models are multiplied by 100 for interpretation as percent changes in the one-year cumulative incidence proportions. All analyses were performed in SAS version 9.04 with NSDUH analysis weights and Taylor series variances.
Results
Descriptive statistics
In aggregate, the population sample under study included 819,543 respondents from the NSDUH surveys conducted between the years 2008 and 2019. The unweighted sample distributions indicate 48% female, 60% White, 13% Black, 18% Hispanic, 2% Native American, 4% Asian, and 4% of more than one race or another race or ethnicity (Table 1). Within the sample, 11% used cannabis recently (past month). Table 1 provides the total unweighted sample characteristics with the NSDUH Public Data Analysis System (P-DAS) used to derive these values.
Table 1
Characteristics of the U.S. population under study from the U.S. National Surveys on Drug Use and Health.
Gender | % | n |
---|---|---|
Female | 47.8% | 322,636 |
Male | 52.2% | 351,885 |
Race | ||
White | 59.9% | 404,314 |
Black | 12.8% | 86,272 |
Native American | 1.5% | 10,095 |
Native Hawaiian / Other Pacific Islander | 0.5% | 3,380 |
Asian | 4.1% | 27,907 |
More than one race | 3.6% | 24,301 |
Hispanic | 17.5% | 118,252 |
Age | ||
12–17 Years Old | 28.1% | 189,789 |
18–25 Years Old | 29.0% | 195,650 |
26–34 Years Old | 12.7% | 86,000 |
35 or Older | 30.1% | 203,082 |
Past month cannabis use prevalence | ||
Did not use in the past month | 88.7% | 597,984 |
4Used within the past month | 11.3% | 76,537 |
Unweighted Sample Total | 100.0% | 674,521 |
S1–S5 Figs show cannabis use incidence estimates for those aged 21 and older over time in different combinations of the state legal categories. Upon visual inspection, the parallel lines assumption and assumption of no anticipation look to have been met in every group by group comparison. For the sake of context and comparison, the average proportion of newly incident cannabis use between 2008 and 2019 in states that never legalized cannabis is 6.2% for 12-to-20-year-olds and 0.5% for those aged 21 and older. The average proportion of newly incident cannabis use in the two years prior to legalization for states that did legalize cannabis is 7.8% for 12-to-20-year-olds and 0.9% for those aged 21 and older.
Event study findings
Figs Figs11 and and22 show the primary findings for individuals aged 21 and older (Fig 1) and those between the ages of 12 and 20 (Fig 2). For those who were legally able to purchase cannabis (21 and older), the legalization of cannabis is estimated to have had no effect on newly incident cannabis use in the years of legalization. However, between two and four years after legalization, RCLs are estimated to have increased incidence by 0.6% [95% Confidence Interval (CI) = 0.1, 1.0]. The corresponding estimate for the interval four to seven years after passage of the RCL is 1.3% [0.8, 1.8] (Fig 1). For the 12-to-20-year-olds, the estimated cannabis incidence does not vary appreciably in any period (Fig 2).
Effect of time since cannabis legalization on cannabis incidence in the 21 and older age group with 95% confidence intervals.
Effect of time since legalization on incidence in 12-to-20-age-group with 95% confidence intervals.
DiD findings
When including the total time post-legalization, the simple ATT estimate derived from the 2x2 DiD indicates no substantial differences in cannabis incidence before and after the laws were passed (p = 0.12). However, since we expected no effect before cannabis sales became effective, we estimated a separate ATT for two years of legalization and later in the 21+ age group as 0.7% (p = 0.003, [0.3, 1.1]). The estimated average treatment effects for those aged 12 to 20 years indicated no differences after the legalization date (p = 0.27) or the effective date (p = .53).
Alternative specifications and robustness checks
In our first alternate specification, we estimate that the effect of cannabis legalization increased the prevalence of cannabis use in the past month among those aged 21 and older by 3.2% between two and four years after legalization (p = 0.0005, [1.6, 4.7]). The corresponding estimate for the interval four to seven years after legalization is 4.3% (p = 0.0002, [2.3, 6.2]) (S6 Fig). In the 12-to-20-year-old age group, no appreciable variation in estimated cannabis use prevalence is seen across these study intervals (P = 0.39 and 0.33, respectively) (S7 Fig).
In the time placebo analysis based upon a randomized legalization date, the date of placebo legalization was set to the year 2011 for all the states that legalized cannabis through 2018. S8 Fig shows an estimated coefficient that does increase slightly over time, yet the estimated effect of this ’placebo’ policy change is null. Note especially that for the adolescents (<21 years), the coefficients are distributed more or less at random in relation to the zero value, with no appreciable differences or patterns (S9 Fig).
Discussion
These results show consistent evidence of an increase in the occurrence of newly incident cannabis use for adults aged 21 years and older after the removal of prohibitions against cannabis retail sales. For those aged 12-20-years-old, the study estimates support the hypothesis that RCLs did not affect the occurrence of newly incident cannabis use for underage persons. In the simple 2x2 DiD models, we estimate an average increase in cannabis use incidence of 0.7 percentage points after recreational cannabis began being legally sold through the year 2019, nearly double the difference between these state groups pre-legalization.
The innovations of this policy analysis relative to prior efforts can be seen in several areas. First, we focus on occurrence of newly incident cannabis use, separating out the population of sustained cannabis users. Prior studies on the associations between RCLs and cannabis use epidemiology focused on past-month cannabis use prevalence [7, 8, 9, 10, 13, 16, 19, 21, 22], the prevalence of daily or frequent users [19, 11, 19], and prevalence of CUD [10, 17]. As such, the importance of understanding changes in cannabis use incidence in response to legalizing recreational cannabis cannot be overstated. Prevalence of use and dependence syndromes and frequency of use are of great public health importance, yet they tell us nothing about whether new users are entering into the population of cannabis users. This study provides an important initial thread of evidence about how liberalized cannabis policies might affect the number of cannabis users who otherwise might never have tried the drug.
Second, our research approach allows for the possibility raised by Cheng and colleagues [4, 5] with respect to alcohol and by Montgomery, Vsevolozhskaya, & Anthony with respect to cannabis [6]. That is, there might exist a large pool of law-abiding individuals who would never have used cannabis if retail sales had not been allowed, but who try cannabis once it becomes legal for them to do so.
Third, this is the first study of which we are aware that has examined the heterogeneity of treatment effects in the years post RCL. The event study design allows for the estimation of effects by years relative to the passage of the recreational cannabis legislation and the effective dates of implementation. This has resulted in three important pieces of evidence: 1) Estimated effects of cannabis legalization on incidence of use seems to increase over time (albeit with possible diminishing returns); 2) Estimated effect sizes vary across age strata defined by the legal minimum retail sales age; and 3) Estimated effect size might be zero for the population to whom cannabis remains illegal. This last piece of evidence might provide some reassurance to policy makers who worry about increased incidence among adolescent populations of the jurisdictions that permit cannabis purchases by adults.
Fourth, the use of a quasi-experimental DiD design provides some allowance for a causal interpretation of estimated intervention effects. With some noteworthy exceptions [11, 13], the evidence published on cannabis policy effects has relied mostly on controlling for observed variables between the populations. Considerable differences exist between populations in states with and without legalized recreational cannabis. It seems reasonable to ask whether controlling for pre-contemplated and measured variables is sufficient to produce valid estimates. The DiD framework constrains unobserved variables within a limited framework of model-based assumptions. Our research included evaluation of some of these often-untested assumptions (e.g., no anticipation; parallel trends).
Lastly, due to our focus on cannabis incidence, this study’s estimates cannot be compared directly with findings of prior cannabis policy evaluations. Nonetheless, a limited comparison is possible and can be seen in the results from our application of the DiD approach to estimates of the prevalence of cannabis use. As in the estimates published by Cerdá and colleagues [13] and by Coley and colleagues [11], our DiD approach disclosed no appreciable policy influence on cannabis prevalence estimates for people under the age of 21. Our estimates of prevalence are similar to the estimates seen in Cerdá et al., Martins et al., and Reed’s more recent findings ([17, 10, 9]. We also note that our findings may help the field to understand seemingly conflicting earlier null findings in this age [15, 21, 22]. Synthesizing the above findings, we suggest that the increases in the use of cannabis in the adult age group may have only began increasing after a few years when recreational cannabis shops began sales.
Limitations and strengths
Before describing some directions for future cannabis policy research, we must describe several limitations of our empirical study. First, it’s difficult to conceptualize cannabis policy evaluation studies that do not rely upon self-reports from general population samples. In other domains, we might look to retail sales records, but before cannabis policy shifts to permit retail sales there are no pre-policy measurements. We also might look to employer records on drug-testing of employees, but these databases are selective and non-representative of the larger population experience, without coverage of the important age strata we have studied. It seems unlikely that cannabis policy evaluation research will overcome the self-report as a limitation for the time being. As an extension of this concern about self-report, we must acknowledge the possibility of differential response biases. Might population members be more likely to disclose cannabis use when they can use cannabis without concern about legal consequences? This question has yet to be answered. The assessments were conducted using confidential standardized audio computer-assisted self-interview modules which have been shown to reduce biases of this type.
Some other limitations of this work include the sensitivity of the findings to different definitions of the study period and an inability to control for sub-state level recreational cannabis legality. The limitation regarding the definition of the study period is important, specifically to our estimate of the ATT. When including the two-year period immediately after legalization (before sales began) in the treatment period, we detected no differences. However, using a study design that allows for dynamic treatment effects and having estimates that are robust to alternate specifications allow us to show where and when the difference in trends occur. This supports the argument that the effect of cannabis legalization is driven by the opening of outlets where recreational cannabis is sold.
Another limitation of this work at the state level is that many counties and municipalities within states that have legalized recreational cannabis have chosen to ban the sale or cultivation of cannabis within that sub-state area. For example, in Washington State, 15% of counties and 55% of municipalities have prohibited the sale of cannabis [33] while in California, 69% of counties and 70% of cities prohibit the sale [34]. Like the null finding between the date of legalization and effective dates of cannabis sales, we expect that estimates of the effects of legalizing recreational cannabis at the state level are diminished by incorporating incidence for many individuals who reside in areas where recreational cannabis is effectively in this pre-implementation state. This sub-group heterogeneity is averaged out in our state-level estimates. While a sub-state analysis is beyond the scope of this study, future research should seek to replicate this analysis at the municipality or county level.
The strengths of this work are the robustness of the estimates, the novelty of the design in this space, and the interpretations that it allows for. Our estimates of the effects of recreational cannabis liberalization on cannabis use incidence by age group were robust to both the check of face validity using the same method to estimate past-month prevalence and the alternate specification using a time-placebo analysis. The use of the DiD event study design moves this field forward by allowing for a dynamic estimate of the causal effect of RCL on the outcome of choice.
As we have demonstrated, it is not reasonable to assume that the effect of cannabis legalization is homogenous over time, especially not if the period includes the time before cannabis sales began. Therefore, future research on the effects of RCL should allow for time-specific effect heterogeneity. Although this is only one study, from which conclusions should not be drawn, this design allows for a visualization of the policy lag effect, about which much has been written [30, 31]. We see that the effect is not linear and is perhaps rather sigmoidal in shape with the increases in incidence and prevalence beginning to plateau, although more data is needed to confirm the trend.
Conclusions
This study contributes novel estimates of how liberalized cannabis policies within US jurisdictions might have influenced occurrence of newly incident cannabis use in the underage (<21 years) and in the adult populations, now allowed to purchase cannabis products in retail outlets. Cannabis policy liberalization continues to be a contentious issue in the national political landscape with different risks and benefits described for all of the potential paths forward. Policy-makers and the voters who elect these policy-makers cannot make the best judgments in the absence of evidence, unless their decisions are to be based on potentially erroneous prejudices or beliefs. The evidence from this study is not perfect, but the estimates provide an evidence base that can be judged in relation to an important question–namely, should we worry about underage cannabis use when adults are allowed to buy cannabis products in retail shops? And might the occurrence of adult-onset newly incident cannabis use increase if this policy change is made? The answer to the first question at this point seems to be that there has been no policy influence on cannabis incidence in the underage adolescent population after adults have been allowed to buy cannabis in retail shops. The answer to the second question at this point indicates a tangible uptick in the occurrence of newly incident cannabis use among adults who otherwise might never have tried cannabis. We are hopeful that voters, policymakers, and public health officials can use this evidence as they forecast what might change if cannabis policies are liberalized to permit adult purchases from retail cannabis shops in their jurisdictions.
Supporting information
S1 Fig
Cannabis incidence in 21 and older age group, first wave legalizing states vs untreated states.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(70K, pdf)
S2 Fig
Cannabis incidence in 21 and older age group, second wave legalizing states vs untreated states.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(63K, pdf)
S3 Fig
Cannabis incidence in 21 and older age group, third wave legalizing states vs untreated states.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(84K, pdf)
S4 Fig
Cannabis incidence in 21 and older age group, first wave legalizing states vs third wave legalizing states.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(83K, pdf)
S5 Fig
Cannabis incidence in 21 and older age group, second wave legalizing states vs third wave legalizing states.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(82K, pdf)
S6 Fig
Effect of time since cannabis legalization on past month cannabis prevalence in the 21 and older age group.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(72K, pdf)
S7 Fig
Effect of time since legalization on past-month cannabis prevalence in the 12-to-20-age-group.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(72K, pdf)
S8 Fig
Placebo effect of time since cannabis legalization on cannabis incidence in the 21 and older age group.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(72K, pdf)
S9 Fig
Placebo effect of time since cannabis legalization on cannabis incidence in the 12-to-20-age-group.
(PDF)
Click here for additional data file.(77K, pdf)
Funding Statement
There was no research support from the cannabis or other non-federal or non-university sources. BWM, MHR, CEM, and JCA wish to acknowledge support from the Michigan State University Vice President for Graduate Studies and Research (university funds) as well as federal research grant support from the National Institutes of Health (5R25DA051249). BWM and MHR also wish to acknowledge the Michigan State University Graduate School for funding from the Graduate Enrichment Fellowship and the University Distinguished Fellowship, respectively. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. There was no additional external funding received for this study.
Data Availability
The data relevant to this study is available from Github at https://github.com/Predict-This/Recreational-Cannabis-Leagalization.
References
1. Lapouse R. Problems in studying the prevalence of psychiatric disorder. American Journal of Public Health and the Nations Health. 1967. Jun;57(6):947–54. doi: 10.2105/ajph.57.6.947 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
2. Kramer M. A discussion of the concepts of incidence and prevalence as related to epidemiologic studies of mental disorders. American Journal of Public Health and the Nations Health. 1957. Jul;47(7):826–40. [PMC free article] [PubMed] [Google Scholar]
3. States United. Substance Abuse and Mental Health Services Administration. Use of incidence and prevalence in the substance use literature: A review [internet]. Office of Applied Studies; 2003. [cited 2021 Nov 13]. Available from: https://citeseerx.ist.psu.edu/viewdoc/download?doi=10.1.1.578.3772&rep=rep1&type=pdf [Google Scholar]
4. Cheng HG, Cantave MD, Anthony JC. Alcohol experiences viewed mutoscopically: newly incident drinking of twelve-to twenty-five-year-olds in the United States, 2002–2013. Journal of studies on alcohol and drugs. 2016. May;77(3):405–12. doi: 10.15288/jsad.2016.77.405 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
5. Cheng HG, Lopez‐Quintero C, Anthony JC. Age of onset or age at assessment—that is the question: Estimating newly incident alcohol drinking and rapid transition to heavy drinking in the United States, 2002–2014. International journal of methods in psychiatric research. 2018. Mar;27(1):e1587. doi: 10.1002/mpr.1587 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
6. Montgomery BW, Vsevolozhskaya O, Anthony JC. An Epidemiological Hypothesis of Policy-Shaped Drug Use Onset Curves. Biomedical Journal of Scientific & Technical Research. 2021;38(1):29994–8. [Google Scholar]
7. Gruber K, Anderson A, Calanan R, VanDyke M, Barker L., Burris D., et al. Marijuana Use Among Adolescents in Colorado: Results from the 2013 Healthy Kids Colorado Survey. Colorado Department of Public Health & Environment Health Watch. 2015. March; 95. Available from: https://www.cohealthdata.dphe.state.co.us/chd/Resources/pubs/marijuanaHWFinal.pdf [Google Scholar]
8. Dilley JA, Richardson SM, Kilmer B, Pacula RL, Segawa MB, Cerdá M. Prevalence of cannabis use in youths after legalization in Washington state. JAMA pediatrics. 2019. Feb 1;173(2):192–3. doi: 10.1001/jamapediatrics.2018.4458 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
9. Reed J. Impacts of marijuana legalization in Colorado: A Report Pursuant to C.R.S. 2021. July. 24–33.4–516. [cited 2022 Mar 1]. Available from https://cdpsdocs.state.co.us/ors/docs/reports/2021-SB13-283_Rpt.pdf [Google Scholar]
10. Martins SS, Segura LE, Levy NS, Mauro PM, Mauro CM, Philbin MM, et al. Racial and ethnic differences in cannabis use following legalization in US states with medical cannabis laws. JAMA network open. 2021. Sep 1;4(9):e2127002–. doi: 10.1001/jamanetworkopen.2021.27002 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
11. Coley RL, Kruzik C, Ghiani M, Carey N, Hawkins SS, Baum CF. Recreational marijuana legalization and adolescent use of marijuana, tobacco, and alcohol. Journal of Adolescent Health. 2021. Jul 1;69(1):41–9. [PubMed] [Google Scholar]
12. Weinberger AH, Wyka K, Kim JH, Smart R, Mangold M, Schanzer E, et al. A difference‐in‐difference approach to examining the impact of cannabis legalization on disparities in the use of cigarettes and cannabis in the United States, 2004‐2017. Addiction. 2022. Jun;117(6):1768–1777. doi: 10.1111/add.15795 [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
13. Cerdá M, Wall M, Feng T, Keyes KM, Sarvet A, Schulenberg J, et al. Association of state recreational marijuana laws with adolescent marijuana use. JAMA pediatrics. 2017. Feb 1;171(2):142–9. doi: 10.1001/jamapediatrics.2016.3624 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
14. Melchior M, Nakamura A, Bolze C, Hausfater F, El Khoury F, Mary-Krause M, et al. Does liberalisation of cannabis policy influence levels of use in adolescents and young adults? A systematic review and meta-analysis. BMJ open. 2019. Jul 1;9(7):e025880. doi: 10.1136/bmjopen-2018-025880 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
15. Smart R, Pacula RL. Early evidence of the impact of cannabis legalization on cannabis use, cannabis use disorder, and the use of other substances: findings from state policy evaluations. The American journal of drug and alcohol abuse. 2019. Nov 2;45(6):644–63. doi: 10.1080/00952990.2019.1669626 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
16. Paschall MJ, García-Ramírez G, Grube JW. Recreational marijuana legalization and use among California adolescents: Findings from a statewide survey. Journal of studies on alcohol and drugs. 2021. Jan;82(1):103–11. doi: 10.15288/jsad.2021.82.103 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
17. Cerdá M, Mauro C, Hamilton A, Levy NS, Santaella-Tenorio J, Hasin D, et al. Association between recreational marijuana legalization in the United States and changes in marijuana use and cannabis use disorder from 2008 to 2016. JAMA psychiatry. 2020. Feb 1;77(2):165–71. doi: 10.1001/jamapsychiatry.2019.3254 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
18. Pacula RL, Kilmer B, Wagenaar AC, Chaloupka FJ, Caulkins JP. Developing public health regulations for marijuana: lessons from alcohol and tobacco. American journal of public health. 2014. Jun;104(6):1021–8. doi: 10.2105/AJPH.2013.301766 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
19. Everson EM, Dilley JA, Maher JE, Mack CE. Post-legalization opening of retail cannabis stores and adult cannabis use in Washington State, 2009–2016. American Journal of Public Health. 2019. Sep;109(9):1294–301. doi: 10.2105/AJPH.2019.305191 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
20. Hall W, Lynskey M. Assessing the public health impacts of legalizing recreational cannabis use: the US experience. World Psychiatry. 2020. Jun;19(2):179–86. doi: 10.1002/wps.20735 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
21. Marijuana legalization in Colorado: Early findings [Internet]. State.co.us. 2016 [cited 2022 Mar 1]. Available from: https://cdpsdocs.state.co.us/ors/docs/reports/2016-SB13-283-Rpt.pdf
22. Kerr WC, Lui C, Ye Y. Trends and age, period and cohort effects for marijuana use prevalence in the 1984–2015 US National Alcohol Surveys. Addiction. 2018. Mar;113(3):473–81. doi: 10.1111/add.14031 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
23. Kim JH, Weinberger AH, Zhu J, Barrington-Trimis J, Wyka K, Goodwin RD. Impact of state-level cannabis legalization on poly use of alcohol and cannabis in the United States, 2004–2017. Drug and alcohol dependence. 2021. Jan 1;218:108364. doi: 10.1016/j.drugalcdep.2020.108364 [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
24. Angrist JD, Pischke JS. Mostly harmless econometrics. Princeton university press; 2008. Dec 15. Princeton university press. [Google Scholar]
25. Montgomery BW, Thompson CL & Anthony JC. The United States National Surveys on Drug Use and Health: An Overview of Sample Size and Participation Levels Since 2002. Feb 2022. Available from: https://github.com/Predict-This/NSDUH-SS-and-PL [Google Scholar]
26. Goodman-Bacon A. Difference-in-differences with variation in treatment timing. Journal of Econometrics. 2021. Dec 1;225(2):254–77. [Google Scholar]
27. Cunningham S. Causal inference. Yale University Press; 2021. Jan 18. [Google Scholar]
28. Callaway B, Sant’Anna PH. Difference-in-differences with multiple time periods. Journal of Econometrics. 2021. Dec 1;225(2):200–30. [Google Scholar]
29. Sun L, Abraham S. Estimating dynamic treatment effects in event studies with heterogeneous treatment effects. Journal of Econometrics. 2021. Dec 1;225(2):175–99. [Google Scholar]
30. Cheng HG, Augustin D, Glass EH Jr, Anthony JC. Nation-scale primary prevention to reduce newly incident adolescent drug use: the issue of lag time. PeerJ. 2019. Feb 12;7:e6356. doi: 10.7717/peerj.6356 [PMC free article] [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
31. Hall W, Weier M. Assessing the public health impacts of legalizing recreational cannabis use in the USA. Clinical pharmacology & therapeutics. 2015. Jun;97(6):607–15. doi: 10.1002/cpt.110 [PubMed] [CrossRef] [Google Scholar]
32. Legal recreational marijuana states and DC [Internet]. Recreational Marijuana. 2022 [cited 2022 Mar 1]. Available from: https://marijuana.procon.org/legal-recreational-marijuana-states-and-dc/
33. MRSC—Marijuana Regulation in Washington State [Internet]. Mrsc.org. [cited 2022 Mar 1]. Available from: http://mrsc.org/Home/Explore-Topics/Legal/Regulation/Marijuana-Regulation-in-Washington-State.aspx
34. Staggs B, Wheeler I, Aitken D, Lawrence P. What are the marijuana laws in your California city? Explore our database of local cannabis policies. Orange County Register [Internet]. 2018. Jan 4 [cited 2022 Mar 1]; Available from: https://www.ocregister.com/2018/01/03/what-are-the-marijuana-laws-in-your-california-city-explore-our-database-of-local-cannabis-policies-2/ [Google Scholar]
- PLoS One. 2022; 17(7): e0271720.
- Decision Letter 0
2022; 17(7): e0271720.
Published online 2022 Jul 21. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0271720.r001
Decision Letter 0
Giuseppe Carrà, Academic Editor
Copyright and License informationDisclaimer
Transfer Alert
This paper was transferred from another journal. As a result, its full editorial history (including decision letters, peer reviews and author responses) may not be present.
27 Apr 2022
PONE-D-22-06272Estimating the Effects of Legalizing Recreational Cannabis on Newly Incident Cannabis UsePLOS ONE
Dear Dr. Montgomery,
Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.
Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 09 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at gro.solp@enosolp. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
- A rebuttal letter that responds to each point raised by the academic editor and reviewer(s). You should upload this letter as a separate file labeled 'Response to Reviewers'.
- A marked-up copy of your manuscript that highlights changes made to the original version. You should upload this as a separate file labeled 'Revised Manuscript with Track Changes'.
- An unmarked version of your revised paper without tracked changes. You should upload this as a separate file labeled 'Manuscript'.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols.
We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.
Kind regards,
Giuseppe Carrà, PhD
Academic Editor
PLOS ONE
Journal Requirements:
1. When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements.
Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at
https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and
2. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If your study included minors, state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians. If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information.
3. Thank you for stating in your Funding Statement:
(There was no research support from the cannabis or other non-federal or non-university sources.
BWM, MHR, CEM, and JCA wish to acknowledge support from the Michigan State University Vice President for Graduate Studies and Research (university funds) as well as federal research grant support from the National Institutes of Health (5R25DA051249). BWM and MHR also wish to acknowledge the Michigan State University Graduate School for funding from the Graduate Enrichment Fellowship and the University Distinguished Fellowship, respectively.
The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.)
Please provide an amended statement that declares *all* the funding or sources of support (whether external or internal to your organization) received during this study, as detailed online in our guide for authors at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submit-now. Please also include the statement “There was no additional external funding received for this study.” in your updated Funding Statement.
Please include your amended Funding Statement within your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf.
4. We noted in your submission details that a portion of your manuscript may have been presented or published elsewhere. (PLOSM , presubmission inquiry,
PMEDICINE-D-22-00520) Please clarify whether this publication was peer-reviewed and formally published. If this work was previously peer-reviewed and published, in the cover letter please provide the reason that this work does not constitute dual publication and should be included in the current manuscript.
5. Please include your full ethics statement in the ‘Methods’ section of your manuscript file. In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well.
6. Please include your tables as part of your main manuscript and remove the individual files. Please note that supplementary tables (should remain/ be uploaded) as separate "supporting information" files"
7. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information.
[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.]
Reviewers' comments:
Reviewer's Responses to Questions
Comments to the Author
1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?
The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.
Reviewer #1: Yes
Reviewer #2: Partly
**********
2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?
Reviewer #1: I Don't Know
Reviewer #2: I Don't Know
**********
3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?
The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.
Reviewer #1: Yes
Reviewer #2: Yes
**********
4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?
PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.
Reviewer #1: Yes
Reviewer #2: Yes
**********
5. Review Comments to the Author
Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)
Reviewer #1: Studies evaluating the impacts on cannabis use of more liberal state-level cannabis policies in the United States have focused on outcomes such as the prevalence of cannabis use and cannabis use disorder (CUD) in national surveys of the general population and youth. The authors argue that these studies have neglected the impact of these policy changes on the incidence of cannabis use, especially among young people whose cannabis use is a major community concern. They report estimates of incidence of cannabis use among those under the legal purchase age (<21 years) compared this with the incidence among older adults.
They note that under prohibition the incidence of cannabis use in the US peaked between ages 15 and 17 with a steady decline as each cohort aged. Because all US states that have legalized recreational cannabis have set 21 as the legal purchase age, the authors wondered whether incidence may vary before and after the population reaches the age of 21 years. milestone is reached. They assessed whether legalizing recreational cannabis affected the incidence of cannabis use in those under and over the age of 21 years.
The authors used data on cannabis use collected annually from nationally representative US samples in all 51 major jurisdictions between 2008 and 2019. Their total sample comprised a probability sample of 819,543 non-institutionalized US residents. They answered standardized questions on cannabis use in computer-assisted interviews, including questions related to the onset of cannabis use in the past year that were used to estimate incidence. They modelled difference in-difference in incidence to study the effects of policy changes in different US states where policy implementation differed over time while controlling for fixed differences between jurisdictions.
Their analysis did not find any policy-associated increase in newly incident cannabis use among persons under the age of legal cannabis purchase age (21 years) in states that had legalised adult use. By contrast, they found an increase in the incidence of new cannabis use among older adults over the age of 21 years and this occurred with a lag after retail sales commenced.
The authors tentatively conclude that legalizing cannabis retail sales in US states increased cannabis use among older adults, but not among those under the legal retail purchase age. They argue that this approach to modeling the effects of legal policy changes on newly incident cannabis use might be more informative for policy makers and the public than modeling the impacts of policy changes on the prevalence of use or cannabis use disorders.
The authors have provided a novel approach to evaluating the impact of cannabis legalisation on uptake among persons who are under and over the minimum legal purchase age in states that have legalised adult cannabis use. Their analysis also presents evidence that setting the minimum legal purchase age at 21 years has encouraged a substantial law abiding section of young people to delay initiating cannabis use until after they have reached the legal purchase age.
Reviewer #2: The approach is novel here and of interest. Given the limitations of state-level RCL, discussed below, it is not entirely clear to me what new information the study contributes and how it will move the field. I think that the method, and focus on initiation, are unique. Yet, if the conclusion is that there is more initiation among adults over age 21 as cannabis is ‘legalized,’ and not among those under 21, consistent with some but not all prior findings (see below) I would question whether this finding will hold up as time goes on and/or whether it is valid now. Specifically, the authors hint at this, but it does not seem to be fully discussed, but could it not be that no increase is being seen among those for whom use remains illegal simply due to that very fact and their mistrust of reporting illegal behavior? If not for all, this is very likely to lead to an undercount among particular subgroups who may be particularly distrustful of government or any organization which could be related to law-enforcement.
The field is increasingly moving toward the understanding that State-level RCL has tremendous limitations in terms of evaluating impact on cannabis use because of the heterogeneity of exposure within a state. This applies not only at a local level (e.g., density and proximity to outlets) but even state-wide because within a given state, for instance, California is a large state by population and geography. The majority of municipalities prohibit the sale of recreational cannabis. Yet, those that do are often densely populated with retail outlets. The authors note this in the limitations section and suggest a county-level approach next. As a side note, cannabis policy is not made at the “county” level in many states, perhaps excepting WA and CO, but at sub-county (town, village, other type of municipality level). Additionally, one RCL state is not comparable to another RCL state in many respects, aside from the general endogeneity issue. The way RCL is implemented, rather than the RCL itself, appears to affect use. Features of RCL that differ within and between states are numerous and impactful, and have been shown to have more impact than RCL itself in policy studies.
So, I find that the results of a state-level analysis, especially up through and including only 2019—which is a very short timeframe post-RCL adoption, is very limited in terms of impact and real-world implications. Further, RCL seems fairly unstoppable at this point but so ways to create policy that is optimal in terms of maximum benefit (not only to big cannabis companies) and minimal harm could have more impact at this point.
The conclusion that there is no increase in cannabis incidence among youth seem also to conflict with prior findings of several studies, so I would be curious how the authors reconcile these findings with those.
On a more technical note, the way that incident cannabis use was defined using the NSDUH variables was not clear to me. I read it several times. Maybe including the specific variables used, just making it more explicit, would be helpful for readers.
Would it potentially be possible to model both incidence and past 30-day use outcomes using this alternative method (which I found compelling) to examine whether results are consistent or whether they diverge.
I am not clear on what the authors mean by allowing for ‘heterogeneity’ that should be considered with RCL effects in this context? Among various groups or only over time? I believe it is clear there is a policy lag not only because that is natural, but because there is often a lengthy delay between “passage/adoption” of a RCL which then leads to more immediate “decriminalization” prior to dispensary openings. For instance, NJ has had a lag of several years, I think, or something along those lines.
In sum, I appreciate the novel approach and the potential import of incidence. But I am not sure that this moves the field farther along at this point given the issues mentioned above.
I’ve included several references that seem relevant with the hope that they may be helpful. The conclusions cited regarding whether there have been increases in use among 12-17 year olds (or those under age 21) overall and/or by RCL status seem not as consistent as suggested, potentially.
Goodwin RD, Pacek LR, Copeland J, Moeller SJ, Dierker L, Weinberger AH, Gbedemah M, Zvolensky MJ, Wall MM, Hasin DS. Trends in daily cannabis use among cigarette smokers in the United States, 2002-2014. American Journal of Public Health, 2018; 108: 137-142.
Weinberger AH, Zhu J, Lee J, Anastasiou E, Copeland J, Goodwin RD. Cannabis use among youth in the United States, 2004-2016: Faster rate of increase among youth with depression. Drug and Alcohol Dependence, 2020.
Weinberger AH, Wyka K, Kim JH, Mangold M, Smart R, Schanzer E, Wu M, Goodwin RD. A difference-in-difference approach to examining the impact of Cannabis legalization on disparities in the use of cigarettes and cannabis in the United States, 2004-2017. Addiction, 2022.
Kim JH, Weinberger AH, Zhu J, Barrington-Trimis J, Wyka K, Goodwin RD. Impact of state-level cannabis legalization on poly use of alcohol and cannabis in the United States, 2004-2017. Drug and Alcohol Dependence, 2021.
**********
6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.
If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public.
Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.
Reviewer #1: Yes: wayne hall
Reviewer #2: No
[NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.]
While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at gro.solp@serugif. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
- PLoS One. 2022; 17(7): e0271720.
- Author response to Decision Letter 0
2022; 17(7): e0271720.
Published online 2022 Jul 21. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0271720.r002
Author response to Decision Letter 0
Copyright and License informationDisclaimer
23 May 2022
Reviewer and Comment # Comment Response
Journal Requirement #1 When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements.
Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at
https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and
Thank you for providing these guiding documents on formatting. The manuscript and associated files have been formatted according to the journal’s requirements.
References have been changed to adhere to the Vancouver style
Journal Requirement #2 Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If your study included minors, state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians. If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information. Thank you for this suggestion, I added the following sentence to the first paragraph on the methods study population: “As this research used publicly available and anonymized data, the research was determined as not human subjects research by the Michigan State University Institutional Review Board on 8/26/2021 (MSU Study ID: STUDY00006620)”
Journal Requirement #3 Thank you for stating in your Funding Statement:
(There was no research support from the cannabis or other non-federal or non-university sources.
BWM, MHR, CEM, and JCA wish to acknowledge support from the Michigan State University Vice President for Graduate Studies and Research (university funds) as well as federal research grant support from the National Institutes of Health (5R25DA051249). BWM and MHR also wish to acknowledge the Michigan State University Graduate School for funding from the Graduate Enrichment Fellowship and the University Distinguished Fellowship, respectively.
The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.)
Please provide an amended statement that declares *all* the funding or sources of support (whether external or internal to your organization) received during this study, as detailed online in our guide for authors at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submit-now. Please also include the statement “There was no additional external funding received for this study.” in your updated Funding Statement.
Please include your amended Funding Statement within your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. Added the sentence “There was no additional external funding received for this study.” in the updated Funding Statement and included it in the cover letter
Journal Requirement #4 We noted in your submission details that a portion of your manuscript may have been presented or published elsewhere. (PLOSM , presubmission inquiry,
PMEDICINE-D-22-00520) Please clarify whether this publication was peer-reviewed and formally published. If this work was previously peer-reviewed and published, in the cover letter please provide the reason that this work does not constitute dual publication and should be included in the current manuscript. The work was not peer-reviewed. It was published online in the medrxiv pre-print server: doi: https://doi.org/10.1101/2022.01.26.22269900
Journal Requirement #5 Please include your full ethics statement in the ‘Methods’ section of your manuscript file. In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. The following sentence was added to the first paragraph of the methods section: “As this research used publicly available and anonymized data, the research was determined as not human subjects research by the Michigan State University Institutional Review Board on 8/26/2021 (MSU Study ID: STUDY00006620)”
Journal Requirement #6 Please include your tables as part of your main manuscript and remove the individual files. Please note that supplementary tables (should remain/ be uploaded) as separate "supporting information" files" Thank you for the suggestion, table 1 is included in the main manuscript on page 12.
Journal Requirement #7 Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Added the required page for Supporting information with corrected supplemental figure titles. Updated in-text citations to match.
Reviewer 1 #1 None We thank reviewer one for a succinct and accurate summary of our work.
Reviewer 2 #1 could it not be that no increase is being seen among those for whom use remains illegal simply due to that very fact and their mistrust of reporting illegal behavior? We thank the reviewer for bringing up this important limitation. We discussed this issue as an extension of the limitations of self-report in our section on the limitations of this research. To reiterate: this is absolutely a possibility that we acknowledge, but it has yet to be shown empirically. However, past research has shown that cannabis is one of the most reliably and valid questions in these surveys and the standardized audio computer-assisted self-interview modules were designed to reduce biases of this type. We did add sub-section headings in our discussion section to more clearly emphasize where the limitations of this study are discussed.
Reviewer 2 #2 As a side note, cannabis policy is not made at the “county” level in many states, perhaps excepting WA and CO, but at sub-county (town, village, other type of municipality level) Thank you for this note. Our reading of the policy literature on this topic shows that states (as you reference) differ in terms of the level of government which is allowed jurisdiction over the issue. In another reading, we do see that you are correct that we do seem to use the term county as a stand in for both counties and municipalities. We have changed some of the language in the manuscript to be more inclusive of the other levels of government that regulate this policy.
Reviewer 2 #3 The conclusion that there is no increase in cannabis incidence among youth seem also to conflict with prior findings of several studies, so I would be curious how the authors reconcile these findings with those. To be clear, no publication to date has studied the incidence of new cannabis use. Therefore, there cannot be a conflict in findings regarding incidence. We did show no increase in past 30 day prevalence among those aged 12-20. However, in our reading of the literature, studies that showed an increase in cannabis use prevalence among youth were in the minority and tended to be earlier papers, some of which used the date of legal change instead of the date of the effective change (i.e., Cerda et al 2017 and Paschall, García-Ramírez, & Grube, 2021). The prevalence of cannabis use disorder among youth increased in both studies that used that outcome, but that is a very different outcome.
Reviewer 2 #4 On a more technical note, the way that incident cannabis use was defined using the NSDUH variables was not clear to me. I read it several times. Maybe including the specific variables used, just making it more explicit, would be helpful for readers. Thank you for this helpful suggestion, we have added the NSDUH variables required for this analysis.
Reviewer 2 #5 Would it potentially be possible to model both incidence and past 30-day use outcomes using this alternative method (which I found compelling) to examine whether results are consistent or whether they diverge. We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. We did in fact model both incidence as well as past 30 day use. The past 30 day use outcomes was used as a robustness check in the way the reviewer suggested. However, the results are somewhat tucked-away in that section of the results and included in the supplemental figures S6 and S7.
Reviewer 2 #6 I am not clear on what the authors mean by allowing for ‘heterogeneity’ that should be considered with RCL effects in this context? Among various groups or only over time? I believe it is clear there is a policy lag not only because that is natural, but because there is often a lengthy delay between “passage/adoption” of a RCL which then leads to more immediate “decriminalization” prior to dispensary openings. We thank the reviewer for this helpful clarification. In most cases in this paper, we were referring to the heterogeneity over time as suggested by the reviewer (i.e., policy lag). We modified some of the language in the paper to make this reference clearer.
Reviewer 2 #7 I’ve included several references that seem relevant with the hope that they may be helpful. The conclusions cited regarding whether there have been increases in use among 12-17 year olds (or those under age 21) overall and/or by RCL status seem not as consistent as suggested, potentially. We that the reviewer for these suggested articles and have added the two that were relevant to recreational cannabis policy associations and effects to our summary of the literature.
Attachment
Submitted filename: Response to Reviewers.docx
Click here for additional data file.(19K, docx)